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Mori: I'm working on Madgic #3 again! I was stuck cooling my heels for months, waiting for my brain, and now I have the final six penciled comics pages I need to get it done. It's all Rawlin stuff, and we don't have a lot of art of him here, so I'm uploading some! (Sorry, y'all only get the non-spoilery stuff.)

People who only know Rawlin by reputation tend to imagine him as some hideous troll of a man, but no, he's really classically handsome... as long as he doesn't move or emote. Once he does, everyone runs screaming. Madgic #3 covers the brief window before that time, when he was still himself and not psychologically hideous.

Rawlin's size makes him a royal pain to fit into panels. He's curled in a ball on our healthymultiplicity.com header bar because it was the only way to make him fit! He's so gigantic, we can't even do the David Hasslehoff tricks of having him lean on things or do the Captain Morgan knee-bend to make him fit better. You have to completely frame the paneling around him, and the challenge is conveying through comics that it is HE who is BIG, not everyone else who is tiny.

I've chosen to deal with it by having Rawlin conspicuously strain the boundaries of every panel he is. Everything should feel just a little too close-up, a little too tight around him. I want it to be uncomfortable, because being around him these days is uncomfortable.

Another thing I've tried to do is show how Rawlin has changed, and how his behavior can make him seem like a decent, overly-large man... or absolutely terrifying once the wheels start coming off his bus. I tried to show the inner conflict in his earlier stages of not-okayness as his compromised self and his original self kinda fight back and forth without him realizing he's doing it... at first. I wanted to be able to follow, by the panel, which Rawlin was running the face levers at any given time, and I wanted Rawlin's realization to be visible.

A comic strip of a conversation between Rawlin and Mori. First, Rawlin strokes his chin thoughtfully. "Well, maybe I changed..." his expression becomes creepily joyful, white-eyed, with a too-wide grin that doesn't reach his eyes. "...but it's a GOOD change, little one! I met an ANGEL!" Mori jerks back like she's been burned; this is clearly a super weird thing for him to say. She crosses her arms and narrows her eyes. "Show me this angel." Despite his cheer, Rawlin's shoulders jerk up. "No," he says, passionately enough it seems to take him aback. He looks away, speaking as though trying to get his thoughts in line. "It's good! The change is good! But I... don't want you to change." His expression makes it clear he realizes just how strange that sounds, and Mori does too. "That doesn't make any sense!" she declares, and by his face, Rawlin clearly knows it too.

I am stupid proud of that last face. That there is the face of a man who has just realized how irreparably he has fucked himself. I'm still not happy with the "No" one.

Ink lines of Rawlin in silhouette, protectively engulfing Mori who is being grabbed from both sides by two pairs of white arms. Clearly an assault is happening, but Mori's expression is calm, even serene, despite her hair and clothes being grabbed. She holds up her hands to Rawlin in a gesture of welcome and transcendence.

Original ink lines. Even when Rawlin was getting god-eaten, for a little while we could still work well together. This was probably the last time we ever did.

The finished art, which now has Rawlin's figure filled in entirely with black, engulfing Mori's figure, which wears a gray shirt. Her body, hair, and the arms grabbing her remain in stake white, as do Rawlin's eyes.
Finished version, with brush pen fills.

Date: 2023-08-07 03:20 am (UTC)
sinistmer: a little dragon sitting at an outside cafe table (Default)
From: [personal profile] sinistmer
I really like how his hands overlap into the next panel! The final version of the picture is really good too. Glad you get to make progress again!

Date: 2023-08-07 08:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tuesday_morning
I have to say that I love your art style. This might sound random, but I somehow feel encouraged to work on my own art style again after seeing this.

Also, definitely excited for Madgic #3 to release!

Date: 2023-08-08 12:22 am (UTC)
talewisefellowship: a long-haired, bearded dude holds a mug of tea with a neutral facial expression. (janusz)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Janusz]

Looking forward to this new comic.

You have to completely frame the paneling around him, and the challenge is conveying through comics that it is HE who is BIG, not everyone else who is tiny.

This makes me think of the Lord of the Rings films and how in addition to all the camera trickery (and things like standing on a box out of frame), they also had scale doubles stand in for the actors in far shots, not just short doubles to play the hobbits, but also a very tall guy to stand in for Ian McKellen next to the actors who played the hobbits. After all, size is relative, Hobbits are small from the perspective of humans, but from the perspective of hobbits, humans are tall. Look up 'lord of the rings scale double' to see photos

(gandalf is technically a maia rather than a human but that's besides the point, he's human-sized)

Also, do you know why Rawlin has fur around his eyes? I've always been wondering that

Edited Date: 2023-08-08 12:22 am (UTC)

Date: 2023-08-08 01:28 am (UTC)
talewisefellowship: a long-haired, bearded dude holds a mug of tea with a neutral facial expression. (janusz)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Janusz]

Yeah that's what I assumed too lol. It makes sense that somebody with a lot of fur would not be comfortable wearing much clothes

Date: 2023-08-08 05:13 pm (UTC)
talewisefellowship: A winking hikaru. He has bangs bleached to a gold color (hikaru)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Hikaru]

Man if I was covered in thick fur I'd do whatever it takes to stay cool, even if it means running around half naked lol. Especially in this weather!

Date: 2023-08-10 04:36 pm (UTC)
talewisefellowship: A winking hikaru. He has bangs bleached to a gold color (hikaru)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Hikaru]

Man, summer heat is the worst!!!

Date: 2023-08-10 04:38 pm (UTC)
talewisefellowship: a long-haired, bearded dude holds a mug of tea with a neutral facial expression. (janusz)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Janusz]

This reminds me. I feel like I asked a question like this before, but does the headspace world have seasons? If not, does it resemble a particular season?

I think I asked you guys before if it had a day/night cycle but I don't really remember the answer.

Date: 2023-08-11 03:35 pm (UTC)
talewisefellowship: a long-haired, bearded dude holds a mug of tea with a neutral facial expression. (janusz)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Janusz]

That is really interesting, thanks for answering

Date: 2023-08-30 04:44 pm (UTC)
talewisefellowship: a long-haired, bearded dude holds a mug of tea with a neutral facial expression. (janusz)
From: [personal profile] talewisefellowship

[Janusz]

That is really interesting, thanks for sharing!

Hopefully you find more about how the weather works there.

Date: 2023-08-08 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] stealthsystem
Okay. This is gonna sound wild. But the way you describe Rawlin, he reminds me of this cheesey sci-fi novel I know... I wouldn't necessarily call it a romance but he seriously does.
It's this one and we spent a long depressive episode in college reading the first two books of the series.

Date: 2023-08-08 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] stealthsystem
We REALLY enjoyed them. Heyoka's dad is Native American, and portrayed well. And the species is really nifty, too, and you get to meet a lot of them who weren't raised by humans. It's a very interesting set all round.

Date: 2023-08-10 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] stealthsystem
Looks like it's out of print as an ebook. It was published in 1999. Please let us know how it goes finding those. :D

Date: 2023-08-10 11:04 pm (UTC)
we: 'The darkest nights produce the brightest stars.' (Vova | Brightest Stars)
From: [personal profile] we
I don't think we've ever seen art of Rawlin, or at least I haven't. He's a lot different from how we expected him to look, that's for certain!

—V.
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